ext_17151 ([identity profile] penny-lane-42.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] muneca_brava 2012-03-14 05:31 pm (UTC)

YES.

Th only thing I can think of rn that really bothered me was the stupid girl-on-girl whorehouse scene that came out of nowhere in order to make an exposition scene more interesting

ABSOLUTELY.

If I wrote those books, I would have an editor.

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