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muneca_brava) wrote2012-03-14 04:58 pm
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Give me a text (book, TV show, movie, etc.) and I will tell you what I would have done differently if I had written it. Not little details, necessarily, but big plot or theme or characterization choices.
Please leave stuff for me to answer because I am having a not-fun day of anxiety and would like to think of something that will not lead to panic attacks. Thank you. :)
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Give me a text (book, TV show, movie, etc.) and I will tell you what I would have done differently if I had written it. Not little details, necessarily, but big plot or theme or characterization choices.
Please leave stuff for me to answer because I am having a not-fun day of anxiety and would like to think of something that will not lead to panic attacks. Thank you. :)
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The main complaint about this show is that there aren't any Asian characters in the America/Asia mix, so I'd definitely fix that.
Other than that, it's hard to say because there was SO LITTLE TIME. But I'd get rid of the first two eps after the pilot and instead have more character-focussed episodes. Especially focussed on Zoe because I never quite felt that I got her until I saw a deleted scene, so that should be fixed. I'd basically just have them sit around and crack jokes tbh. Possibly in formalwear. Oh, and the other episode could be one where the girls and the boys are separated and it could be all about how awesome the girls are. Also in formalwear? :D
And I would not have done some of the things that were apparently planned for the next seasons, but obviously that's not relevant.